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新托福独立写作中间段常见问题解决方法

2012-05-31  点击:3637

 根据托福考试出题机构ETS的评分标准的最新要求,我们总结了常见的独立写作中间段中出现的问题,解析了问题所在并给出相关解答。

 
 1.Q: 独立写作中间段的结构是什么?
  A: 论点Main point Sentence +论据Details。尽量不要突兀地写For example,需要指明例子之前的论点句。其中,论点句指的是证明开头段中观点的理由,论据则是该理由的细节展示。
  比如:
  论点: Another advantage of living with an American family is that the students are in an ideal environment to improve his English.
  论据:For example,each time he has a conversation with someone in the family, this native speaker can help him with the pronunciation and grammar. Maybe the younger children in the family can help him with his homework, too. But the most important thing is that he will be surrounded by English most of time during his stay in the United States.
 
  2.Q: 怎么展开一个中间段落才能做到评分标准5分要求呢?
  A: 将论点展开有很多方法,比如:Specific personal example 少而精的个人经历;General example 多而简的宽泛例子罗列;Compare& Contrast对比反差;Study &Survey 调查数据;Famous people权威名人;Quotation名言谚语等。
 
  3.Q: 独立写作中间段的论据如果想写个人经历,应该怎样写才能得高分?
A: 注意个人经历内容写到精确具体,语言做到准确地道形象。比如:
  论点:English does not seem to be spoken by Americans in the same way that it was presented in my textbooks.
  个人经历:Take myself for example, the first time I asked an American a question, I got a strange response. The man who answered my question said something sounded like “dunno”. I was sure that I had never studied this expression in my textbooks, and I could not find anything like this in dictionary. Eventually, I was surprised to learn later from a friend that this was nothing more than a shorten version of  “I do not know”. 
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